BJ
Ponytail
by
BJ Neblett
©
2013
This story appears in Short Story Me. For a free read please click the link below:
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Your writing is beautiful, lyrical, almost poetic. I can picture perfectly every image you draw, every scene you paint: the softball retreating from the sky; Ponytail gracefully running across the field; the love you hold for her in your eyes. What a beautiful piece! And you say it is non-fiction. Someone is very, very lucky to know you!
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